I am sure the jobs around 404/407 are included on the map. You have to remember that the census tracts are divided according to population, not employment. So certain places with very dense employment will be obscured if they are part of a very large employment district, and therefore the census tract would be huge, and therefore the employment density would averaged out across the whole tracts and the variations of density within would be obscured. Of course, this is assuming that census tracts were used. That is just my guess, based on the first map, so i could be wrong.
They are very good maps I think. Both are very useful in different ways, but I have issues with the colour scheme. For the density I would have just used a yellow-red colour gradient. You used green, but I when I see green I think parks. Normally that isn't an issue, but on these maps the parks are actually shown also, but they are white. That is a conflict I think. But it is a minor thing. Blue is also too similar to the lake. But again, it is a minor issue.
You might consider combining the farmland (i.e the tracts that have been designated as non-urban) with the parks, because obviously the the farmland will have low density anyways, and so the density of those tracts are not important. Even for me, it is sometimes hard to tell the distinguish between low-density urban census tracts and rural tracts, and that distinction is important, imo.
I don't see how add nighttime and daytime density can be to the map without making it confusing. Sometimes it is better to have seperate maps. But what is the point of it anyways? Is there a big difference between population density and nighttime jobs-population density?